The third book in The Field family is Catalyst. It’s written from Eric’s younger sister, Marcie’s perspective when she is 17 years old and Eric is 19 – two years older than in The Field. In Indian Summer, the first book chronologically, Marcie is 12 and experiences visions of a Native American girl guiding her as well as premonitions and synchronicities.
Here’s the first page of Catalyst. It went through about a dozen re-writes and this may not even be the final iteration. What do you think? Does it grab your attention and draw you in?
Catalyst
Chapter 1
I’ve had glimpses of something beyond my five senses. Usually it’s
premonitions and intuition, but four years ago when I was in middle school I communicated
with the spirit of a Native American girl. I want to experience that again, but
I don’t know how. Sometimes she inhabits my dreams and I wake up wishing I
could connect with her while I’m awake and wondering if I imagined it all in
the first place. It feels like a door that was once open to me is shut and I
don’t have the key. Thinking about it gives me a vague, unsettled feeling. It’s
like something is missing from my life.
I give myself a mental shake and pull the door handle to get out
of the car, determined not to give in to anxious thoughts. Hopefully the next
few weeks will keep my mind occupied with other things.
We
arrive at the Angel Mounds archaeological dig site in time for dinner. That’s
when all the students in the field study are supposed to arrive for orientation
and a ‘meet-and greet’ evening as my mom refers to it. It’s her dig. She’s an archaeologist
at the University and I’ve been to several of her sites over the years, but
this is my first time actually working on a site. Not bad for a summer job – at
least that’s what I’m hoping. It’s unpaid, but still great experience. She was
able to get all three of us – me, my bother Eric and his girlfriend, Renee –
spots on the dig team.
I’m checking out the people milling around the clearing when I see them. Their presence immediately commands my attention.
Most
of the others are probably college students from the University, archaeology or
anthropology students, doing a summer field study course, but these two are different.
The
man suddenly turns and looks me straight in the eye. It’s as if he senses me
looking at him, or thinking about him.
Because that’s how it feels. Like he’s reaching out and touching my thoughts. I
hear him say, ‘hello, Marcie’, not audibly, but inside my mind. I take a slight
step back, startled, but hold his gaze and the connection between us. In my
previous experiences I’d never heard words spoken. Just thoughts and feelings.
He inclines his head toward me and touches the brim of his hat before returning
to talk to his blond companion. I’m a little disturbed by the whole exchange. Something
about him makes me uneasy. My skin shivers and I rub my arms to dispel the
feeling. Who is this guy and how had he communicated with me?
I
shift my gaze to the woman. Her caramel-colored hair is braided into a heavy
rope hanging down her back and she’s gesturing in smooth, fluid motions as she
talks. She gives the impression of being both still and animated, reminding me
of a cat stalking its prey, immobile save for the twitching of its tail. Contained is the word that comes to
mind. The way her eyes roam over the other waiting people, stopping only
briefly to look at me, enhances the feline resemblance.
